Feature: On Revision by Professor Cameron Dezen Hammon
“The artist, in this model, is like the optometrist, always asking: Is it better like this? Or like this?” George Saunders At one point in the eighteen-month period during which I revised my memoir, This Is My Body, I tried to quit. I’d tweaked, tooled, and re-imagined many, many sentences. And these were not just any sentences.…